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The Day of Black Sun.
By: Trent Knutson

Chapter 1

Jon woke up and he was somewhere he didn’t know of. It was a large cave of someplace he thought, but in the distance he saw no light at the end. He thought to himself “I am dreaming this can’t be true” but deep inside him he knew it was, he knew why he was here and most importantly he knew who had brought him here.

It all started on Midsummer’s Day his eleventh birth night. Fa had warned Jon that someday he would be taken from his home and “set free” he said, but as Jon sat there now he said out loud “right now I am anything but free”. Then when he was sleeping a demon wolf came up upon their camp sight and slashed his giant paw upon Fa’s chest. As he lay dying there he said “son, this all happened for a reason never forget that. Jon swear that you will never forget that” when Jon said nothing he said it louder “Jon swear, swear it on your soul that you will never forget that it all happened for a reason”. “I swear upon my soul that I will never forget”. Now what Fa was going to say hurt the most to Jon “now I want you to switch bows with me”, “but Fa you need yours…” his father cut him off “Jon do it I will be glad to have something of yours when I pass. So Jon switched bows and left the camp sight by hugging his dad and saying “that nothing will ever be the same again.” And his dad said, “yes it will son, when this is all over everything will be back to normal” that left Jon smiling on his way out.

Now Jon is on his own with a little food left and his knife, his dad’s bow and his sleeping sack and he was braving the woods with this demon wolf still on the loose. He was one of the White Hare clan of the far north. But when his dad had been hurt we had to leave the camp sight so the demon will not hurt the others. So he decided to go get water and set up camp for the night. That’s when everything started to go wrong. When he was getting the water one thing went right he had found his pack-brother. One white hare was wondering close to the edge of the woods in the snow “probably looking for his mother and father” Jon said to himself, but they were nowhere to be seen. So Jon being able to speak to all animals put his hands to his lips and called the hare to him.

As soon as the hare heard the call he came running to the voice thinking it was his ma and pa. But when he got there it was this strange figure. “He smells like white hare, he can talk the white hare but he does not look like the one of the pack”. The hare thought to himself. He went and examined him and when he went to the backside he saw that he had no tail. “Are you a hare” the animal asked. “No but I no the way of the White Hare and I can lead you the way a pa can, I will give you shelter food and a friend but you will have to be my pack-brother” The strange hare said, “ok if you say so, I will go with you and be your pack-brother” the animal said. “Good” Jon Said, “but know one thing I am the pack-leader at all times”, “ok” the hare said. And so it be written in stone that the Hare and Jon are pack-brothers from now till the day they both die.

Chapter 2

So now they were together. So they set out on their long defying journey. It was nearly ending dawn and they needed to set up camp. They picked a comfortable spot but close too the water so if it floods they will be in trouble.
But little that they know that was the least of their problems…
Late in the night Jon woke up with a fright someone or something was outside camp sight. He first heard the sound of crunching leaves which he thought was very strange, then he saw them two large figures walking in circles around the camp sight with for no apparent reason. Now Hare was awake and knew they were there “when they get to the other said we break for it ok” said Jon in hare talk, so they packed their stuff very silently and when they reached the other side they booked it out of their setting traps behind them as they went.
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